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BIBLIOGRAPHY ON CREATIVE WRITING FOR THE SERIOUS WRITER

Creative-writing-courses--007Since this is novel writing month, this bibliography is created for those writers of fiction who care about the quality of their work. There are two aspects to creative writing; the first of course being the writer’s ability to imagine a story that will capture the readers’ attention and provide them with an enjoyable trip filled with exciting characters, beautiful scenery, intriguing plots, captivating dialogue and an ending that will leave them wanting to read more. The other important aspect of writing is to know and understand the craft associated with writing acceptable fiction. A writer can accomplish the second aspect of the art by 1) taking expensive creative writing workshops, or 2) invest in books that have been written and will allow her/him to learn the craft through individual study. In order to assist those writers who care about the quality of their work as well as those readers who want to read with a discerning eye, I have compiled a list of books that will assist you in your endeavor. This bibliography is made available to you because Prosperity Publications believes that all writers should always seek constructive means to improve on their writing skills.

Category 1—
Books comprehensive in scope; concentrating on all elements of the craft

Swain, Dwight V. Techniques of the Selling Writer, University of Oklahoma Press, Norman and London, copyright @ 1965, ISBN #0-8061-1191-7
Dwight Swain is known as the Guru on the craft of fiction writing. His book has long been the primary source of information on the craft. Mr. Swain has advised that, “No one can teach talent, but the practical skills of the professional writer’s craft can certainly be taught.” And that is exactly what he did over the years.

Vogler, Christopher, The Writer’s Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers, 2nd Edition, Michael Wiese Productions, Studio City, California, copyright @ 1998, ISBN #0-94118870-1
Christopher Vogler provides the writer with a step-by-step guideline for structuring plots and creating realistic characters. Through the use of innovative exercises, he helps writers troubleshoot and improve their craft, and will help empower the writer’s command of storytelling with the ancient wisdom of myth.

Frey, James N. How To Write a Damn Good Novel, St. Martin’s Press, New York, copyright @ 1987, ISBN #0-312-01044-33
James Frey has written a hard-hitting, no-nonsense approach to the craft of storytelling. This is a practical, systematic, witty and wise approach to writing a novel. It is perfect for beginners or professional writers who need a crash course in the down-to-earth basics of storytelling.

Zuckerman, Albert, Writing the Block Buster Novel, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @ 1994, ISBN #0-89879-598-2
If you plan to write the panoramic novel much like those written by the great James Michener, then you must read Zuckerman’s instructional book on how to create larger then life characters, magnificent scenes, and compelling story plots. Best-selling author Ken Follett has referred to Zuckerman as, “the best editor in the world.” He has taken his editorial skills and made them available to all serious writers in the pages of this book.

Gotham Writer’s Workshop, Writing Fiction: The Practical Guide from New York’s Acclaimed Creative Writing School, Bloomsbury, New York and London, copyright @ 2003, ISBN #1-58234-330-6
Eleven writers and teachers contributed to this work. It covers all the key elements of writing fiction in a very clear and concise way. If one is going to teach a course on the craft of writing, then this book should be at the top of the list of works to be used. The most effective summation of this work comes from the founders of Gotham Writer’s Workshop when they write, “There’s no easy formula for creating great fiction, but a fundamental knowledge of writing craft is, more than anything, what will allow your talent to blossom…”

Stein, Sol, Stein on Writing, St. Martin’s Griffin, New York, copyright @1995, ISBN #978-0-3122-5421-6
The best way to describe this work is in the words and writing of the author. Sol Stein writes, “This is not a book of theory. It is a book of usable solutions, how to fix writing that is flawed, how to improve writing that is good, how to create interesting writing in the first place.” Nothing more need be said. Stein is recognized as one of the very best editors in the business.

Rhodes, Jewell Parker, Free Within Ourselves, Fiction Lessons for Black Authors, Main Street Books/Doubleday, New York, copyright @1999, ISBN #0-385-49175-1
Dr. Rhodes has written a comprehensive study of creative writing, but her examples are pulled from African American writers. Included in her comprehensive coverage of the craft are segments celebrating the beauty, strength and great attributes of the African American culture. Dr. Rhodes justifies her approach when she writes, “Never in four years of college or five years of graduate school was I assigned an exercise or given a story example that included a person of color. While the educational system and the publishing world have become progressively more welcoming of African-American authors, there is still little attention to educating, supporting and sustaining the writing process of African American authors. Her work is a successful attempt to eradicate that long-standing error.

King, Stephen, King on Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, Pocket Books, New York, copyright @2000, ISBN #978-0-7434-5596-1
The first part of this work is a memoir on King’s evolution as a very successful writer. It reads much like a novel, taking the reader into his life as he grows to become the famous writer he now is. In the second part of the book, he shares with the reader what he knows about writing and that takes us into the craft. In the final section he explores ways on how the craft should actually be applied to the story.

Meredith, Robert C. and Fitzgerald, John D., Structuring Your Novel, From Basic Idea to Finished Manuscript, Harper Perennial, A Division of Harper Collins Publishers, New York, copyright @1993, ISBN #0-06-273170-X
This work illustrates techniques used by professional novelists to include the fourteen elements of structure. The authors use excerpts from Henry Fielding’s, Tom Jones and Harper Lee’s, To Kill a Mockingbird. The authors help the writer develop his/her theme (one of the most difficult exercises for the beginning writer), refine the plot and develop complete characters.

Marshall, Evan, The Marshall Plan for Novel Writing, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1998, ISBN #1-58297-062-9
Book agent, editor and novelist Evan Marshall has developed a 16-step “Marshall Plan” for the beginning as well as seasoned writer. If you closely follow his plan, according to the author, “there is no chance of working yourself into a corner or making critical mistakes in pacing and plot.

The Editors of the Writer’s Digest, Handbook of Novel Writing, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1992, ISBN #0-89879-507-9
This is the work of twenty-nine of the best editors, coaches, and writers within the genre. Each writer concentrates on a specific element in the fiction-writing genre. The students get a little extra in this work as the writers also discuss how to negotiate a profitable contract once you have followed their basic steps and completed your work. As a creative writing instructor, I have found this work one of the most useful in developing my lectures and I often go back to it as a refresher.

McCauley, Robie and Lanning, George, Technique in Fiction, Revised and Updated for a New Generation, St. Martin’s Press, New York, copyright @1987, ISBN #0-312-05168-9
These authors concentrate on the technical questions and practices of fiction. In the introduction they state that, “It takes as much technical learning and skill to write a good novel as it does to play a violin concerto and no person is born with such skills.” The technique is learned from exceptionally good teachers and these two authors are in that category.

Woods, James, How Fiction Works, Farrar, Straus and Giroux, New York, copyright @2008, ISBN #978-0-312-42847-1
This work is much different than others of the same subject. Instead of a description of the elements it is an analysis of why they are important. In his analysis, some of the fundamental questions he asks, 1) what do we mean when we say, “know” a fictional character? 2) What constitutes a telling detail? 3) When is a metaphor successful? 4) Is realism realistic? 5) Why do some literary conventions become dated while others stay fresh?

Bickham, Jack M., The 38 Most Common Fiction Writing Mistakes (And How To Avoid Them) Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1992, ISBN #0-89879-821-3
This is the most useful book for writers because it is a checklist of red flags in writing that will cause your manuscript to be rejected by agents and editors. It is the most helpful 112 pages you will ever read as an aid to your writing. Keep it on your desk right next to your computer and refer to it often.

Category 2—
Books that concentrate on specific elements of the craft.

Bickham, Jack M., Scene and Structure, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1993, ISBN #0-89879-906-6
This is probably one of the most important books you will read in order to learn how to avoid the major flaw of most writers, and that is to show the action and not tell the story. Agents, editors and teachers will stress to writers that in today’s market your novel must be filled with action and conflict, and your reader must feel as though they are experiencing what is happening. The author must disappear and the story stand-alone. It is called the invisible hand of the author. Bickham does a great job in this book demonstrating how, through good structure that leads to scene-sequel-scene, the writer can escape the trap of telling the story instead of showing the action. Scene and structure are the primary and essential elements that writers must master in order to move to other important aspects of the craft.

Kercheval, Jesse Lee, Building Fiction, How to Develop Plot and Structure, Story Press, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1997, ISBN #1-884910-28-9
Kercheval has produced a useful book to help the beginning writer understand how structure is key to advancing the plot from scene to scene. Her work will help the writer understand the essential role conflict plays in plot. She discusses in detail, the essential elements of conflict to include 1) conflict, 2) crisis, 3) falling action, and 4) resolution. A writer must master the use of these component elements in order to write a successful novel. She also has a chapter comparing writing a novel to a short story, and further discusses the novella as an art form.

Noble, William, Conflict, Action and Suspense, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1994, ISBN #9788-0-89879-907-1
How do you make your novel into a real and legitimate page-turner and not just part of the rhetoric that chosen friends place on Amazon when they call your work “a real page turner,” or “I couldn’t put it down until I read the last page.” In order to make those over-used words mean something, you must master the art of creating conflict, action, and to some degree suspense. In all novels conflict and action are essential, but suspense also can add to the intrigue of your story. This book is very useful in your quest toward achieving control of your reader through use of these particular tools of the trade.

Rosenfeld, Jordan E. Make A Scene, Crafting a Powerful Story One Scene at a Time, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @2008, ISBN #978-1-58297-479-8
This book is comparable to Bickham’s mentioned above in importance to understanding scene construction in a novel. The author navigates the student through the basic fundamentals needed for strong scene construction, and also explains how other elements of the craft fit within the framework of individual scenes in order to provide structure to the novel. Like Bickham’s work, this also is a must read.

Swain, Dwight V., Creating Characters; How To Build Story People, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1990, ISBN #0-89879-662-8
The key to any successful novel are the characters you create to capture the imagination of your reader. Long after the basic plot, readers will remember interesting characters. The reader must love them, hate them, laugh and cry with them, but most important find them interesting enough to keep reading your story. The teacher Dwight Swain provides you with the ingredients necessary to create those characters, from the protagonist to the antagonist and all in between. It is essential that you master the art of building characters that are rounded and not flat, dynamic and not stereotype. Swain does that for you in this book.

McCutcheon, Marc, Building Believable Characters, Writer’s Digest Books, Cincinnati, OH, copyright @1996, ISBN #1-58297-027-0
Some writers have created characters that have become immortal. Richard Wright’s Bigger Thomas in Native Son, Langston Hughes’ Simple, Toni Morrison’s Sethe in Beloved, and Scout Finch from To Kill a Mockingbird. These well-crafted characters pass from one generation to the next and represent the prototype for other writers to follow when creating their main characters. McCutcheon’s book will assist you in also creating such immortal individuals. His work is very unique because it begins with a roundtable discussion of six novelists revealing their approaches to characterization. He also provides you with a questionnaire and once you complete it, you will know your fictional characters quite well. Finally, he provides you with a thesaurus depicting specific human characteristics that you can choose from to fit your characters. He provides you with everything you need to create people with great depth, and the potential for immortality.

BIBLIOGRAPHY ON CREATIVE WRITING FOR THE SERIOUS WRITER
Compiled by Frederick Williams, Executive Editor, Prosperity Publications
www.prosperitypublications.com

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Response to the Author | “What’s in a Name?”

Back on October 4, I had posted on my writer’s blog,” What’s in a Name?” The purpose for that particular post was to challenge those who have changed their name from what they perceived as a “slave name,” to what they perceived as an African name or no name but only a letter. In that post, I questioned does the name make the person? One of the most profound responses I received was from Brother Andrew Jackson (Sekou Molefi Baako), Executive Director, Langston Hughes Community Library and Cultural Center at the Queens Library in New York. His synthesis of both the African American and African names is worth posting so that all those who read my post can also have the pleasure of viewing his analysis.

Greetings, Brother Man!

I’ve been asked that same question during my years here at Langston Hughes Community Library, and Cultural Center, especially since I share the name of our 7th President and one who’s record with both enslaved Africans and Native Americans is questionable at best.  In 1994, I received the first three of the five African names given to me, (Sekou-Warrior, Molefi-He keeps Tradition and Baako-First born-of the Jackson Triplets),.My mother asked me if I was giving up the proud family name Jackson and Andrew-after her father, and Preston-after my uncle for “…some names she could not even pronounce?

It was then that I made a decision to put into practice the Second Principle of Kwanzaa’s Nguzo Saba, Kujichagulia (Self-Determination).  I decided I would not give up my American (slave) names out of respect for my ancestor grandfather and uncle and the other ancestor Jacksons who had suffered in one of the most racist states in America, Mississippi.  They suffered so I might have a better life and privileges they were denied.  I would keep both sets of names to connect my African past with my American present. Together they make me a complete human being.  I use both sets of names interchangeably and am known by both.  Both sets of names  appear on my signature block, on my business cards and stationary.  I am Andrew P. Jackson (Sekou Molefi Baako)!  (The other two names I was given are Bhekizizwe-take care of your people and Orbai-teacher.  They suffered so I could have the choice of keeping both names or changing them.  The made that possible, not the names. and not me.

So, this question is a common one, but it is not what names you have, but who you are through action and deed. I wholeheartedly disagree with those Afrocentric brothers and sisters who believe you have to have an African name to be truly Black or African; in order to respect, acknowledge, understand and practice your African heritage.  I know too many brothers and sisters with African names who disrespect their ancestors and ancestry and their love of self and other Black people is questionable at best.  Too many hypocrites who carry African names but disrespect our women and themselves, our people and their names.   I know too many brothers and sisters who spit the rhetoric but don’t commit themselves to building a strong Black community for tomorrow.

Each of us has the blood of Africa flowing through our veins. We are African people, descendants of enslaved, kidnapped Africans and brought to the New World to build this country, the Caribbean Islands and worked in the mines of Brazil.  Our ancestors suffered, overcame and survived for us their children and great grand children.  We come from strong stock of humans who survived in spite of 400 years of slavery and many more years of American oppression.  Yet, too many of our brothers and sisters know little of their rich African history prior to being enslaved, know nothing of the rich history of the Ancient African Empires or the contributions we made to the world and America.  Africa, the second largest continent, where most, if not all of the natural resources the world needed and still needs can be found today.   Africa, located in the middle of the world map.  Africa where life on this planet began.

What’s in a name?  Indeed!  I am Andrew P. Jackson (Sekou Molefi Baako)!  A Proud African man living in America. An activist librarian, an educator, an author, an African Man, a Proud Black Man, descendants of slaves.

What’s in a name?  Each of us has to ask ourselves that question and answer it for ourselves.  That is not the right of others.  And, yes, you are so right did that make Crispus Attucks, Mary McCleod Bethune, Salem Poor, Sojourner Truth, Nat Turner, Marian Reginald Lewis, Wright Edelman or James Baldwin less because they didn’t have African names?   Our lives are not measured by the names we carry, its based on the lives we live and what we do during our lifetime.

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Davey Crockett or O. B. Mann: Who was the Real Hero?

David Crockett | Photo Courtesy of Google Photos

David Crockett | Photo Courtesy of Google Photos

I would imagine that when most of you read the heading of this post, a smirk crossed your face and you asked who in the world was O. B. Mann? Furthermore, you probably wondered how could I possibly posit such a question when comparing a “no name” to an established heroic figure that every young person knows of either through reading books, or has seen in one of the two movies about the Alamo. Therein lies one of the major problems with the manner in which American history has been recorded and fed to our young in every school in this country. Truth be told, once the historical facts are revealed, O. B. Mann was a much greater person in his heroic efforts than Davey Crockett. My strong assertion is based on the causes for which each of these men was fighting in their lifetime.

 Every schoolboy knows Davey Crockett as that rough and tough frontiersman who wore the coonskin hat and could shoot a rifle with precise accuracy. Crockett is best known as the hero who, along with a cadre of fighters, took on Mexico’s General Santa Ana at the Alamo on March 21, 1836, and though they lost, put up a gallant fight for freedom. Visions of John Wayne playing the role of Crockett will be forever etched into the memory of adults as well as children in this country. He may have lost the battle that day, but he is revered because he took on an evil force and refused to back down to its wickedness.

The truth be told, that interpretation of Crockett and what he fought to preserve is fallacious and that is why the question; “Who is the real hero?” Davey Crockett was like many Anglos who drifted toward Texas because that’s where the action was. He knew, as did all the others fighting to free Texas from Mexico, that the key issue was slavery. Under Mexican rule, slavery was illegal and southerners who had migrated to Texas (which includes Crockett who was from Tennessee) insisted that they break free from Mexico simply because Santa Ana would not legalize slavery. The irony of the War of 1836 is the belief that it was a war for freedom. To the contrary, it was a war designed to eventually take away the freedoms of the Blacks living there, and also open the door for southern planters to cultivate cotton plantations with slave labor. Instead of Crockett fighting against the evil, he was fighting to spread an evil.

O B. Mann was a Black man not known by the overwhelming majority of American citizens. He owned, along with his brother, Mann Brothers Grocery Store in the Greenwood section of Tulsa, Oklahoma, better known as Black Wall Street. In May 1918, he was inducted into the United States Army and before the war ended was sent with the famous Ninety-Second Infantry Division, an all-Black fighting force, to the trenches in Argonne Forest where he fought with distinction. Like many Black Americans at the time, he was encouraged by Black leaders to put their differences with the country aside, go and fight for democracy and the conditions would change when they returned home.

Like thousands of others, Mann followed the advice of men like Dr. W. E. B. Du Bois and fought valiantly for this country, despite the flood of flyers dropped from German airplanes encouraging the Black soldier not to fight for a country that treated them worse than what the Germans would. They fought, and after it was over came home to discover that what the Germans told them was true.

Many of the veterans who returned to an oppressive apartheid system refused to accept the abuse and one of those men was O. B. Mann. A tall, imposing figure, he had no problem telling the racist in Tulsa that Black veterans would not allow any man or woman to be lynched on their watch. So on Memorial Day 1921, when word got back to the Black community that Dick Rowland had been arrested for accosting a white girl, and when the local newspaper the Tulsa Tribune editorialized that Rowland would be lynched, Mann returned to action. Early that evening he and his men confronted the white mob in front of the courthouse, and when one of the white men was shot and killed by Mann the battle was on.

Early in the morning of June 1, over 10,000 white men, filled with rage and hate, crossed over the Frisco Railroad Tracks and attacked the residents of Greenwood. But with his men, Mann put up a courageous fight defending their side of town. They were so successful that the enemy brought in airplanes that commenced to drop kerosene soaked explosives on the buildings and the homes.

Much like Crockett at the Alamo, Mann and his men were outnumbered and with the addition of the airplanes could only hope to hold off the mob until many of the residents escaped into the woods. They were successful and as a result probably helped prevent a great deal more murders than what actually happened. Despite his efforts, the slaughter of innocent men, women, and children was so gruesome that the state of Oklahoma hid it from the history books for years. Still, there is no mention of the brave deeds of O. B. Mann and his men.

Unlike Davey Crockett who was defending a fortress that if he had won, would have brought about the enslavement of thousands of men, women and children, Mann was defending a section of the city in order to protect his people from the evil determined to destroy them.

Therefore, the answer to the question posed earlier is evident; O. B. Mann deserves his place in the annals of American history as a real hero.

You can learn more about this hero in “Fires of Greenwood: Tulsa Riot of 1921.”

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